Monday, February 25, 2008

AvatarLoverGirl's Request: It's Love at First Sight

(I hope you like AvatarLoverGirl! Sorry about how you act so cold towards Kiba in the beginning, but that’s how someone acts towards a complete stranger…)


“Kakita!” A young girl ran through the main square of Konoha.
Her dog had randomly charge off without warning and Madi was trying to catch her.
Suddenly, Kakita came to a screeching halt in front of another huge dog.
There was a boy on the dog’s back.
The boy laughed and picked up the small dog in front of him.
“This yours?” He slid off his dog slowly and walked up to Madi.
“Yeah, so what?” Madi turned away from the boy, “Plus, you scared her.”
The boy laughed, hard, “Sorry, my bad.”
He set Kakita on Madi’s shoulders.
Kakita whimpered and jumped down then hid behind Madi.
“Aww, Akamaru’s friendly, don’t be afraid.” The boy squatted and stuck out his hand for Kakita to sniff.
“Who are you?” Madi frowned, if this dude was going to come up and pet her dog, she wanted to know who he was.
“Kiba Inuzuka; and who are you?” He smiled as Kakita walked out to him and yipped.
“Madi, just Madi.” Madi turned up her nose at the scent of this boy, he smelt like wet dog.
“Your dog is hungry, she must’ve come running when she smelt the dog treat in my pocket.” Kiba took the treat out of his pocket and handed it to Kakita.
“Kakita don’t eat that!” Madi grabbed the treat from Kiba’s hand; “We don’t know this guy.”
“Hey I have a huge dog, do you really think that I would try to poison your dog?” Kiba stood up and smirked.
“I guess not.” Madi threw the treat down to Kakita, who devoured it in a second.
“I have more at my house…” Kiba smiled, “come with me?”
“Uh, I guess…” Madi went to pet the large dog in front of her, “Hmm, wooly.”
“Brush him every day.” Kiba grabbed Madi’s hand and pulled her up onto Akamaru.
“What about Kakita?” Madi reached for her dog, but Kiba pulled her back up.
“Have faith in your dog, she can run.” Kiba whispered something into Akamaru’s ear softly, and Akamaru took off at an amazing speed.
Kakita ran after them, and could actually keep up.
After a few minutes Madi and Kiba arrived at the Inuzuka household.
Kiba gently slid down off Akamaru then held his hand out to Madi.
“I can get down on my own thank you very much.” Madi said, when in truth she couldn’t.
Madi slipped and fell into the dirt.
Kiba covered his mouth to muffle his laughing.
“Whatever.” Madi stood and dusted herself off.
“Sorry.” Kiba blushed and scratched his head, in an embarrassed way.
Kiba grabbed hold of her hand and ran to the door, “Come on in.”
“I don’t really feel comfortable with that…” Madi hesitated and pulled her hand from Kiba’s grasp.
Kiba twitched, then frowned, “Fine, I’ll go get the treats. Alone, with no one to be with, I wouldn’t be surprised if I feel down the stairs and died…”
“Wimp…” Madi followed Kiba into the house, Kiba had won her over.
“Oi! Great!” Kiba laughed and pulled Madi into the house.
Madi walked in, huge, a huge house was all around her.
Everything was in order.
“Be careful, my mom just cleaned, and if we mess it up then she’ll just die.”
“Mom? Just how old are you?” Madi was surprised, this guy looked like he was an adult, he was really tall.
“15… and you?” Kiba laughed, people always thought he was older then he really was.
“I’m 15 too…” Madi smiled for the first time at this weird boy.
Kiba turned away and blushed, her smile was just so pretty.
“You okay?” Madi laughed.
“Uh, yeah…” Kiba continued to rummage through the cabinet.
“POW POW POW!” There was a strong knock at the door.
“I’ll get it!” Kiba called to his sister who was upstairs.
Kiba ran to the door and threw it open.
It slammed against the wall and left a dent.
“Shoot!” Kiba touched the wall to see what the damage was.
It wasn’t all to bad.
But then Kiba looked out to see who had knocked.
It was Shino, who was in his weekend clothes (A hoodie and no glasses, and if I do say so myself he looked awesome.)
“…” Shino frowned; he had had plans to go with Kiba to the sea.
“Sorry Shino, I spaced. Let me go get ready, and you don’t mind if I bring someone do you?” Kiba stood out of the way to let Shino come in.
“Who?” Shino asked.
“Take a look.” Kiba smiled.
Shino looked past Kiba and saw Madi, “I, I, I…”
“I know, seriously, isn’t she great? She has a dog too!” Kiba laughed out loud at Shino’s gaping expression.
Madi noticed the outburst and walked over the Kiba and Shino.
“Who’s this Kiba?” Madi asked while smiling.
Shino blushed furiously and shifted his gaze to a plant on the windowsill.
Madi laughed.
“So what’s up?” Madi asked Shino.
“…” Shino couldn’t say a thing.
“We’re going to the beach, wanna come?” Kiba smiled at Shino and gently punched him on the shoulder.
“Well, can we go to my house? I need a bathing suit, I just bought the cutest one ever!”
That was too much for Shino, “Meet me at my house” Shino managed to mutter to Kiba, then he feverishly stepped out of the house and walked down the street to his house.
“Is he okay?” Madi sighed as an invisible question mark hovered over her head.
“He’s shy.” Kiba smiled and laughed it off, “Let’s go get that swimsuit you were talking about.”
“Okay!” Madi walked out of the house and started down the road with Kiba, Akamaru, and Kakita trailing behind her.
After about 15 minutes of walking, they turned up at a small house in the woods.
“Cute.” Kiba smiled, this house was pretty small.
“Just you wait” Madi smiled and took Kiba inside.
The house seemed to expand.
“Wow…” Kiba looked around with shock.
“Yeah… wait here while I get my suit on.” She ran upstairs.
“Madi…” Kiba didn’t believe in love at first sight, but now he was making an exception.
Madi ran back downstairs in her bikini and grabbed a towel out of the bathroom.
“Shino’s gonna die.” Kiba muttered under his breath, and began to blush himself.
“Let’s go!” Madi jumped off the bottom stair and onto the first floor, she ran out the door as she draped the towel around herself.
“We have to ride on Akamaru if we’re going to make it there in time.” Kiba climbed onto Akamaru’s back and pulled Madi up, but a little too hard.
Madi was pulled on top of Kiba and they both fell off.
Akamaru whimpered and lay down in the dust that had been stirred up by Kiba and Madi.
They both broke out laughing and got back on Akamaru then raced off into the forest with Kakita running behind them.
When they arrived at Shino’s house Madi fell off Akamaru once again.
“Need a hand sweetie?” Kiba asked, half-joking, half-serious.
“Sure.” Madi only understood the joking part.
Kiba and Madi knocked at Shino’s door.
Shino answered.
“…Woah…” Shino didn’t even bother to look at Kiba, his gaze was stuck to Madi.
Madi laughed, but was partly embarrassed by Shino looking at her like that.
She pulled the towel more tightly.
Kiba twitched, he could tell that Shino was bothering her.
Kiba grabbed Shino by the hood, pulled him inside, and shut the door.
“Mine.” Kiba stated very clearly.
“…” Shino didn’t say a word.
Kiba reopened the door and smiled at Madi, who smiled back.
Shino grabbed his back and headed out the door.
They all took off to the beach.



Kiba and Madi sat splashing in the water.
Madi didn’t even care about the wet dog smell anymore.
Madi picked herself up and charged at Kiba, she jumped onto his back and hung there for a moment before Kiba spun her around and fell on top of her.
“KASPLOOSH!” they were both soaked from head to toe.
They both broke out laughing.
Shino just sat on the beach running his hands through the sand.
Kiba suddenly stopped laughing and got a very serious look on his face.
Madi stopped laughing to.
Kiba leaned towards her, as in to kiss her; after all it was love at first sight.
But Madi must have not felt the same, at least not quite.
For Madi Pushed Kiba off of her and ran to dive into the water.
“Maybe not today,” Kiba smiled to himself, “maybe tomorrow.”

The End


Hope you like it Madison /AvatarLoverGirl