Thursday, February 14, 2008

Story 2: Finding Your Place


SO BORED SOMEONE LEAVE A COMMENT!!!!! This is story 2:

“What do you want from me?” Kiba was choking on his own tears.

“Well, what’s wrong with you?” The person the voice was coming from was hidden in the mist.

“Nothing!” Kiba tried to get up from his awkward position on the ground.

“You’re wrong.” A foot came down and kicked Kiba in the side, hard.

Kiba yelped and fell over once again.

Akamaru who had been thrown up against a tree whimpered.

“Shut up you stupid dog.” A much larger dog stepped out of the fog towards Akamaru.

Kiba reached for his dog, but couldn’t reach him for a sharp pain ran through his side.

Akamaru yowled and then was dead silent.

“Akamaru!” Kiba screamed in terror, was his dog dead?

“You really need to learn your place Kiba.” The voice crept over Kiba like a blanket.

Kiba didn’t respond, he didn’t care anymore; His best friend was gone, and he was probably going to die anyway.

Kiba closed his eyes in hope that this person would think he was dead and go away, but he was in too much pain to act very well.

“I know your faking.” A kunai knife came down at Kiba head and just barely missed his left eye.

Instead the knife scratched his cheek and went half-way into the ground.

Kiba tried to scream, but the cry for help was cut short by the injury on his rib cage.

“Come Kreo.” The voice said, and the dog came bounding up to its master.

“Kreo?” Kiba thought, he had heard that name before.

Kiba took a big sniff of air, only to find that the scent was familiar, to familiar.

“You!” Kiba called into the bog, but his older brother was out of earshot.


The next thing Kiba knew was that he was in the hospital.

Shino and Hinata were sitting by his bed.

By the looks of it, Hinata was asleep and Shino was staring off into space in a way only Shino could do.

“Hey guys” Kiba said, still a bit winded by his encounter the night before.

Hinata looked up and Shino snapped out of his suspended state of spaced out

The first thing Hinata did was flood him with questions.

“Are you okay? What happened? Why were you outside so late? What are you stupid or something?” she asked in a flurry.

Kiba just looked at her with a confused face, to bad Hinata hadn't been their last night when he really needed her.

"My brother..." Kiba trailed off.

“Brother? I thought your brother left.” Hinata was surprised.

“Me too.” Kiba sighed.

Kiba tried to get up out of bed, but found it very difficult to move.”

Kiba lifted up the left side of his shirt and saw that he was fully bandaged, “Guess I did break a rib.”

“Try 3 ribs, did you fall out of a tree?” Shino asked.

“Tree? No, Where’s Akamaru?!” Kiba started to panic.

“He was with you?!” Hinata lifted her head off Kiba’s bed, “We thought he was at home!”

“Oh Akamaru this is all my fault.” Kiba turned over and put his head under the pillow.


Ok I’m to lazy to write any more write now






1 comment:

Anonymous said...

poor Akamaru